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Fig Newton ([identity profile] sg-fignewton.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nightspear 2008-11-05 10:49 pm (UTC)

Jack looked to him warily, thinking that this was perhaps almost as personal to Teal’c—Sha’uri’s first captor looking for redemption—as it was to Daniel.

Oh, yeah. Because Sha'uri might not be Daniel's husband, but she's still family, and Teal'c is even close to Daniel in your AU than he is in canon, I think. So, yes. Ow.

Jack wished this hadn’t been the first time he’d heard Teal’c laugh.

OW.

I damaged some of the controls in the peltak during the journey from Abydos

Ah, yes. That's my Sha'uri.

“He says that you are all welcome, but not the Ettin-born child.”

Huh. Creepy, that.

Great drama here, meshing two storylines into one. I love that Teal'c earns his exception to the Hammer, so to speak.

Poor Daniel, once he gets back to Earth and has to account for what he's done!

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