ext_3310 ([identity profile] littlebelleblue.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nightspear 2008-12-08 06:14 pm (UTC)

Had to comment again . . . I love seeing how Daniel is dealing with things he's never seen before. The seatbelt scene was great, and I loved Jack pointing out Earth's constellations.

" . . . but it hasn’t gotten me out of grinding our flour" made me laugh and “Daniel Mshai Jackson, born 100 days before Winter Solstice, in the first year of freedom from the false god Ra after 5880 years of slavery on Abydos" made me tear up. I love the glimpses of their lives on Abydos.

One small nitpick: “I’m can communicate in more than ten . . ."
Should be "I can communicate . . ."?

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