Thank you! I can see why you were so determined to get this chapter "right"! Great job. You DID get it "right". :-)
The feel and interplay of all the characters was wonderful, and I pumped air when you confirmed my deduction that Sha'uri had been referring to Cimmeria. :-) The only thing that gave me pause at all was "entering" the Hall of Mjolnir. I always assumed that the only physical opening was the "exit" beyond the Hammer (most reliable way to force a Goa'uld through the Hammer), and that people not beamed in would have to enter and exit through that Hammer. How do you envision the Asgard keeping Goa'uld from going out your front entrance? Another Hammer? Nit-picky-mind here is evidently not envisioning whatever you envisioned (and is now into some serious pondering).
Anyway, thanks for another terrific installment. Since you still have 11 chapters to go, I suspect that Jack is correct and Daniel WILL return to the SGC (or poor Skaara [and Sha'uri?] are in for MANY chapters of withdrawal).
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The feel and interplay of all the characters was wonderful, and I pumped air when you confirmed my deduction that Sha'uri had been referring to Cimmeria. :-) The only thing that gave me pause at all was "entering" the Hall of Mjolnir. I always assumed that the only physical opening was the "exit" beyond the Hammer (most reliable way to force a Goa'uld through the Hammer), and that people not beamed in would have to enter and exit through that Hammer. How do you envision the Asgard keeping Goa'uld from going out your front entrance? Another Hammer? Nit-picky-mind here is evidently not envisioning whatever you envisioned (and is now into some serious pondering).
Anyway, thanks for another terrific installment. Since you still have 11 chapters to go, I suspect that Jack is correct and Daniel WILL return to the SGC (or poor Skaara [and Sha'uri?] are in for MANY chapters of withdrawal).