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ext_6477 ([identity profile] sg-wonderland.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nightspear 2009-03-07 10:14 pm (UTC)

Best line of the whole chapter: “Me! Hello!” Jack yelled. “Major Carter! I order you to...see me.”

Wow, it is very different if Daniel isn't the one out of phase, isn't it? I loved how you portrayed Jack's impatience, very, very Jack. Just hated to lose the Jack-falling-on-his-face-and-Teal'c-picking-him-up scene!

And I'm of two minds whether I want Nick and Daniel to acknowledge their relationship. But, if this plays out like the original, Jack's already spilled those beans with that last remark to Nick...


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